Above is my original double page spread. After using the feedback which I was given in order to improve my music magazine, I had altered it using different images, different fonts and positioning my text differently to make it look more professional and presentable. This involved me taking more pictures of my 2 band members in good costumes in order to be photographed. In addition, it involved me experimenting with different fonts to see what works best with the music genre I am working with, Indie.
I was also told to use the space on the page more effectively which involved moving the columns over, changing the size of my text and adding more pictures of the band to the page. Originally, I had 3 members in the collided band, Will, Brad and Alfie but I decided to take photos without Will as the photos looked better with only the 2 members. Also, I removed the musical instrument which was in the image as it didn't look right and made the band members look more natural as they aren't expected to be photographed. Below is my updated and improved double page spread. I kept the columns the same width but made the gap between the sides and the middle the same size making it look more presentable. Also, I added a line underneath the title of the double page spread just to make it look neater and so that it is separated from the introduction paragraph.
I also added more photos which meant that I had t go to the photograph room with my 2 band members but ad to wait for a day which they were wearing good costumes to give me more to work with to make the best possible double page spread.
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